Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Quick Time Out

First, thanks to Carroll Morris who reviewed Alma on her blog, Crusty Old Ladies. You may know Carroll from her best-selling series, Almost Sisters, that she co-writes with Lael Littke and Nancy Anderson. I actually reviewed on of their books, Surprise Packages, here. Thanks, Carroll!

Also, I'm finalizing Alma the Younger. I'm about 250 pages into the revision. The book right now is about 340 pages. There might be a scene or two to add, but it will top out around 90,000 words. Then onto the readers before I turn it over to the publisher.

Many of you writers are doing the NaNo challenge--you are a bit crazy, but I understand the zombie-writer state. Remember if you're looking for editing advice after getting those 50K words completed, check out my writing/editing blog Writing on the Wall that I share with Lu Ann Staheli, Julie Wright, Josi Kilpack, and Annette Lyon.

Monday, November 2, 2009

Burnt Cookies & 85K




My advice, don't bake and write at the same time.

These lovely black cookies were snickerdoodles in dough form. My 5 year old loves to bake cookies with me on Sunday, but yesterday one thing after another cropped up and we didn't get around to it. So this morning we decided to make a batch of snickerdoodles. My daughter loves to mix the cookies until her hand gets tired, then it's "Mom's turn."

So it's her job to tell me when the buzzer is ringing. Unless I'm in the kitchen I rarely hear the timer due to other household noises such as radios, washing machine, tv or (heaven forbid) the computer.

We did well for the first two pans, then on the third pan my daughter decided to go and play with a friend. I let her, thinking I'd listen extra carefully for the buzzer. Some time later as I was merrily typing away, I smelled something burning. I immediately suspected the small heater in my office that sometimes gives off a burnt smell. Then I realized . . . cookies. At least I got to the smoke before the smoke detector could go off.

But in less smelly news, I hit 85,000 words today in my WIP--Alma the Younger. This was my first draft goal! Basically I'm connecting chapters that I wrote out of order. I hope to finish it by this weekend, then for the straight read-through (which can be quite scary). Once I get through the 2nd draft, the book will probably be about 90,000, then onto the alpha readers!


**More book reviews of Alma came in. Check them out:

Review from the Association for Mormon Letters. Thanks to reviewer Kathleen Dalton Woodbury!

Review from Six LDS Writers and A Frog. Thanks to Julie Coulter Bellon! She is the published author of several suspense novels, including the recent All's Fair. I was really blown away by her review. Julie is a tough editor and her review really gave me a lot of motivation to get this next book finished on time!

Thursday, October 22, 2009

Whitney Nominations and 2 more reviews

Thanks to Cheri Chesley, aspiring writer, for her review of Alma here. She read Alma first, then Abinadi (as I saw on GoodReads). So it can be done :)

Also, thanks to author Tristi Pinkston, who also reviewed Alma here. I've really enjoyed all of Tristi's books and you can see my review of her mystery, Agent in Old Lace, here.

Okay, so I read a lot of books, and I review quite a few. Mostly I just rate them on GoodReads. It's been a very handy tool to find out what my "friends" are reading and what they recommend. It's easy to put together a "to-read" list and then to print it out and stick it in my purse. I often make purchase requests at my library or I buy the books through Amazon, Costco, sometimes Target. Reading has always been a passion of mine, and I really credit reading to starting my journey to becoming a published writer.

The Whitney Awards is an academy that recognizes excellence in fiction written by LDS writers (not to be confused with the LDS genre, but it encompasses that as well). Anyone can nominate a book by an LDS writer by going to http://www.whitneyawards.com/. There are several categories, including Suspense, Romance, Speculative, Historical, General, YA, etc. etc. The deadline to nominate is December 31, 2009, so I am assessing my list of books that I still have to read. A complete (and continually updated) list of books by LDS writers can be found on the LDS Publisher blog.

I know I won't be able to read every book, but I'm trying to make a dent so that I can nominate the best of the best for 2009.

Just for fun, here is a list of the books I've read so far this year that qualify for the Whitney nomination. My reviews of these books are on GoodReads or LDSReaders. I haven't turned in my nominations yet, because I think there are still about 6-7 must-reads before I make a final decision.


Far World 2: Land Keep by J. Scott Savage

The Maze Runner by James Dashner

Hunt for the Dark Infinity by James Dashner

The Hourglass Door by Lisa Mangum

Tower of Strength by Annette Lyon

The Last Waltz by GG Vandagriff

All the Stars in Heaven by Michele Paige Holmes

Lemon Tart by Josi S. Kilpack

English Trifle by Josi S. Kilpack

Methods of Madness by Stephanie Black

Agent in Old Lace by Tristi Pinkston

The Forgotten Warrior by Kathi Oram Peterson

Eyes Like Mine by Julie Wright

Everything is Fine by Ann Dee Ellis

Dragon Spear by Jessica Day George

Princess of the Midnight Ball by Jessica Day George

The Actor and the Housewife by Shannon Hale

Forest Born by Shannon Hale

The Chosen One
by Carole Lynch Williams

Pursued by Lynn Gardner

Illuminations of the Heart by Joyce diPastena

The Sister Pact
by Cami Checketts

Torn Apart
by Diony George

Trail of Storms by Marsha Ward

Wings by Aprilynne Pike

Heroes of the Fallen by David West

Alma by H.B. Moore (of course!)

The Hotel on the Corner of Bitter and Sweet by Jamie Ford

Christmas Jars Reunion by Jason F. Wright


On my immediate to-read list, I have:
Shudder by Jennie Hansen
Saving Madeline by Rachel Ann Nunes
Warbreaker by Brandon Sanderson
My Fair Godmother by Janette Rallison
The Ball’s In Her Court by Heather Justesen
The Christmas List by Richard Paul Evans

I know that books are still coming out--what are the books that you think are must-reads? I will add them to my list!

Monday, October 19, 2009

NEW BOOK & More reviews

This past week, I received some author copies of All Is Bright--a new Christmas compilation. The final version has a small change. I was thinking I might actually be published under my "real" name--Heather Moore, but nope, the final has H.B. Moore. Oh well :-) I've read through most of the Christmas stories and have really enjoyed them. The best part is that the book retails for just a few dollars and will make a great neighbor gift (ready, neighbors?).

Update on Alma the Younger: I haven't written for several days since it was Fall Break and the kids were out of school. So we went to the Arches National Park. My son has been wanting to go forever. Well, he wore us out, even to the point that he was carrying my five year old on his back so we could hike to that next scenic view. So . . . I'm about 230 pages into Alma the Younger. I think it's shaping up pretty well. I have most of Alma the Younger's scenes written, so when I finish, I'll go back through and insert Alma the Elder's point of view scenes.


More Reviews on ALMA:

Thanks to Laurie LC Lewis, who is a historian and author of the historical Free Men and Dreamers series. I was a little nervous about her reading the book because she is very detailed researcher, so check out her review here: Laurie LC Lewis: Book Nook


And thanks to Kate Palmer, who posted an interview on her blog. She has a beautiful webpage and posts all kinds of recipes with step by step pictures. She asked several thought-provoking questions, such as why I chose to write in the view points of the Book of Mormon prophets.


Teri Rodeman is an avid reader and reviewer. She reads a ton, so I was very interested to see what she thought of my book. She compared the story to what our country is facing today. Hmm. There is some truth in that!


Also, prolific author, Sherry Ann Miller, reviewed Alma. She is the author of many books, including the recent Mama's Lemon Pie. Sherry pointed out that she enjoyed the research, selecting the use of rubber in Mesoamerica as an example. I love hearing how each reader comes up with something new that stands out.


And many thanks to Sandra of The Dance, who reviewed Alma as well. I met Sandra at a book group when Provident Books was around. She has become a faithful reader, and I love to visit her blog. She has a great outlook on life.

Thursday, October 8, 2009

Two Books for Kids (and you too) & More Blog Tour

Thanks to Kami for reviewing Alma on her blog: A View Thru Many Lenses. She has been a faithful reader :) And she uses her blog to "scrapbook" memories for her kids. Brilliant idea.


Also, Taffy reviewed Alma on her blog: Taffy's Candy (what else would she name her blog?) She is an aspiring writer and posts her WIP word count on the side bar, so it's fun to see it increase. She is also a librarian and I love to talk books with her!


Speaking of books, I read a lot. I admit it. I certainly don't apologize for it. Once in awhile someone will ask me how I find time to read, especially since I'm an author. My answer is that it's part of my job. Just as a dentist goes to a dental convention to learn about the newest technology in veneers, I must read the bestselling books (it's a tough job, I'll tell you. Requires a popcorn.)


This summer I was able to read ARC's of two great books--for kids--but I loved them too. And now they are actually available so I can tell you about them. (And according to the FTC rules, I think I have to announce that I don't get paid to review on these blogs, and one of the ARC's was free, the other I bought on Ebay, but YES, I'll be buying multiple copies of these books for my kids and their friends . . . Also, I think I have to disclose that I know the authors personally--yes I know both--but neither asked me to write reviews.)

If I just lost you, you'll find this post interesting by Literary Agent, Janet Reid:







The Maze Runner
By James Dashner
October 2009, Delacorte Books for Young Readers

Have you ever read a book, then set it down and wondered, “How have I settled for reading so many mediocre books . . . when this one is fantastic?”

“He began his new life standing up . . .”—begins The Maze Runner by bestselling author of The 13th Reality series, James Dashner.

Thomas knows his name, but that’s about it. He’s forgotten everything else. Everything. Even his age.

It’s pitch black, and Thomas is in a metal contraption of sorts—moving upward. When the elevator stops, the top opens to reveal a group of boys staring down at him. “Nice to meet ya, shank,” one of the boys says, “Welcome to the Glade.”

Thomas stumbles into a glade surrounded by a seemingly unsolvable maze. Each night the maze doors shut, and each morning the maze has reconfigured itself. The glad is ran by a group of boys, but no one can get in and no one can get out. Once a week the elevator delivers food and other goods. But the week that Thomas arrives, the elevator stops delivering food. Instead it delivers a girl. The first one to ever come to the Glade.

Thomas not only has to learn to survive, but how to protect his new friends, and solve the maze before the entire population of the Glade falls prey.

The Maze Runner is a definite page-turner that starts out interesting, then quickly hooks you. The dystopian world which Dashner creates is fresh, from the descriptions to the dialog to the actual names of the kids. I loved the puzzle-solving aspect of the book, which having read Dashner’s other books, he is truly masterful at. I’m looking forward to the 2nd book in the series: The Scorch Trials. Dashner is a gifted story-teller.









Farworld: Land Keep
By J. Scott Savage
October 2009, Shadow Mountain

“Water. Land. Air. Fire. Together, the balance of Farworld they keep.” Kyja and Marcus are on a quest to outdo the Dark Circle by convincing the four elementals of Farworld to work together. In the first book of the Farworld series, Water Keep, Marcus and Kyja were able to get the water elementals to cooperate, but now they have to travel to find the land elementals. Problem is, no one can tell them precisely where they are since they’ve been missing for thousands of years.

In this second installment, Land Keep, the captivating adventure continues. Marcus—a boy with magical powers, and Kyja—a girl who wants magic more than anything. The two soon find out that they each have to trade what’s most dear to them in order to survive.

Since Marcus’s birth, sacrifices have been made in his behalf that he is only now beginning to realize. But the longer he stays on Farworld, the faster his health declines. In a race against time, the characters must outsmart the Keepers and determine who is really on their side.

The plot is far from simple, but the complexity is rich and satisfying as questions proposed in Water Keep are answered in Land Keep. A clear picture of this new world emerges as the characters discover that things are not necessarily as they seem. Land Keep is highly visual, fast-paced, with multi-layered intrigue. But most importantly, the characters breathe life into the pages, pulling us into a magical realm. One that is truly powerful.

Monday, October 5, 2009

ALMA Blog Tour & Updates

This past weekend I signed at the Redwood Seagull Book in Salt Lake. It's always an exciting time to do a booksigning because people come from all over the world to SLC during General Conference. One thing on their to-do list is to shop for the newest LDS materials.

I signed books for a couple of long-time readers, and also a gentleman from Canada and another from England. So Alma will be doing some traveling.

This past week, I also had the opportunity to read an advance copy of David West's upcoming book Heroes of the Fallen. This book won't be available in November, but David asked me to read it several months ago, so I was excited to get the ARC. Heroes of the Fallen is a novel based on the last days of the Nephite civilization. From the first chapter (Prologue), I was captured by David's writing style. It's very poetic and vivid, reminiscint of the time and culture. I told David that coming up with description in my own writing is not a natural talent, but something I have to go back through my first draft and add in.

Speaking of writing, I'm about 200 pages into Alma the Younger. This past week, I was able to make some important decisions and actually outline most of the rest of the book. Outlining is not something I do much--Brandon Sanderson would call my writing style "multi-drafting." But I'm excited to complete the 150 or so pages left, and see what my beta readers think!

A few more reviews came in for ALMA, Check them out:

Jennie Hansen--Meridian Magazine
It's always an honor to be reviewed by Jennie Hansen on Meridian Magazine. She is a prolific and well-respected LDS reviewer, but she doesn't review everything she's sent. She is also a bestselling author, and her new book, Shudder just came out. It looks fascinating, and it's on my list of fall reading.

Jewel Adams--Jewel's World
Another author! Jewel has published several clean romances, and she graciously reviews books as well. Her latest book, Place in This World was just released.

Heather Justesen--Clean Books for LDS Families
Heather Justesen just started a Facebook page for Clean Books. She included Alma in her line up (thanks!), and Heather also has her first book coming this month: The Ball's In Her Court.

Ronda Hinrichsen--The Write Blocks
Ronda is an award-winning author. She just won the Best Novel award from the League of Utah Writers for her unpublished book, TRAPPED. Her first book, MISSING, will be out this month.

Saturday, September 26, 2009

ALMA Blog Tour & Booksignings

A busy week! I'm a little behind my word count goal--I wrote 4,000 words in Alma the Younger, and my goal was 5,000. One of the reasons is because I had to prepare a presentation for the Book Academy Conference at UVU. I blogged about the keynote speaker, Brandon Sanderson, here. I can't wait to read his newest book, Warbreaker. Any Brandon Sanderson fans out there?

So I took my first Alma the Younger chapter to my critique group. It's a chapter that might be a forward prologue (kind of what I did in Abinadi). They liked it, but they thought the "hook" wasn't powerful enough--you know those pesky first chapters have to draw the reader in immediately. So back to the drawing board. I wrote a completely new chapter last night, and will still retain parts of the former chapter, but I'll be interested in what my critique group will say now.

Back to Brandon Sanderson--he saves drafts of all his books. In other words the chapter I just nixed, he would have kept it and put it up for his readers to review. Hmmm. Something to think about.

On Friday, I signed copies of Alma at the Seagull Book in American Fork. I think I signed every last copy in their store (like 50+). So if you need a signed copy--go there!

Some really great reviews and interviews came in this week for the blog tour:
Kathi Oram Peterson at Kathi's Writing Nook: She is another Book of Mormon fiction writer and has written The Forgotten Warrior--a YA novel that's a time travel story. It's a very entertaining read, for teens and adults alike. Awhile back, I reviewed The Forgotten Warrior here.

Nikki Wilson of Mormon Mommy Writers posted an interview with me. Nikki is also a writer, and her big question for me was how to push past writer's block. You can check out the interview to find out my tips :)

Danyelle Ferguson at Queen of the Clan also reviewed Alma. Danyelle is also a writer, and is in the final stages of her upcoming book: Teaching Special Spirits. Her journey to publication has been really interesting, and I'm looking forward to her new book.

Nichole Giles of Random-Ish reviewed Alma on her blog, along with some funny questions. Nichole is also a writer and her first book will be out this December: Mormon Mishaps and Mischiefs--Hilarious Stories for Saints. If you read Nichole's other blog posts, she is a really funny gal, the perfect person to write this type of book.

Thanks Ladies!


My next book signing is:

October 2, 2009 - Redwood Seagull Book,
Pre-Conference Signing 1:00 - 2:00 p.m. (1720 South Redwood Road, SLC, UTAH)

Also to read the first three chapters of either Abinadi or Alma go here.